the last fish

In this unwritten pastiche the central character stares out over a deserted coastal town, entangling himself with mysterious couples, psychiatrists and fliers as the world around him falls slowly but irrevocably into a beach-fatigued 50s sf version of itself. “Every so often, as he waited for nightfall–signalled by the long repetitive sweep of the old Ferrari’s headlights against the greenish afterglow above the esplanade–Carson would force himself up and down Hermione Miro’s small swimming pool at a slow crawl, these few enervated daily laps a way of convincing himself that he still existed.” Etc etc. We think this is a metaphor. But here’s the concept: in Carson’s world, as in ours, everyone without sufficient ego is vanishing. As the story progresses, we see that Carson is vanishing too.

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3 responses to “the last fish

  1. The Swimmer (movie) with Burt Lancaster?

  2. Am i going to win something if i guess that some marginal characters in this unwritten pastiche are capable of making fantastic shapes out of clouds?

  3. This must be Skegness, and I claim my inflatable Marilyn Monroe with hypercubic underpass attachment.

    Ballard needn’t have bothered with the Riviera. Ego loss obscures most of the English east coast.

    http://aeropigs.com/Skegness.JPG