Long ago when I was more easily bullied, the industry retitled In Viriconium for US paperback without my permission. Although the publisher kindly offered me a list of the usual fantasy phrases we might choose from together, I didn’t feel I could help betray the first book I was in any way proud of writing.
Climbers was originally called The Rock Garden, a title that referred metaphorically to the bijou satisfactions and limitations of UK outcrop climbing, and literally to the setting of a pivotal scene in the novel. It brought those elements together and acted to frame and present what is admittedly a complex text. The industry thought it might confuse readers because it was the name of a music venue in Covent Garden. I reverted to the working or placeholder title, which was anyway appealingly blunt.
There were no problems with The Course of the Heart. Not the first time an irony of mine has been welcomed into the bosom of fantasy.
Light wanted to be called Empty Space, but the industry thought that was too depressive, ie not bombastic enough. It also risked suggesting to the reader that nothing much might happen, in a book that began as it meant to go on, with a misogynist mathematician & a heavily armed spaceship suffering from BPD. As a title, Light, like Climbers, had the advantage of being direct, but it also conveniently suggested its opposite; and later I was able to use Empty Space after all, for the third volume of the trilogy. So that was a win. I still think of the whole work as Empty Space –a satisfying set of references taking in absurdism, physics and dramatic theory.
The placeholder title for my novel in progress is Anabasis. I was planning to call the finished object The Future, but that’s taken. Titles aren’t copyrightable, but you want to avoid a collision if you can, unless you’re using a monumentally cliche phrase or saying, as in Signs of Life or Travel Arrangements. One of the problems if you go for the banal (or even something from physics) is that your book disappears into the babel of start-up names which is Late Google, less a search engine than a directory of businesses near you. Another is that the algorithm generally doesn’t get sarcasm. So now I try to use distinctive, multi-word phrases like You Should Come With Me Now or Things That Never Happen.